PRESENTATION OUTLINE
"Thinking about Thinking"
"Going meta":writing about writing, learning about learning, talking about communication
Triple meta: write about the experience of Writing about Writing
Due today:
Bird by Bird chapters: “Small Assignments” and “Perfectionism”
Write Away:
2 quotes from each:
Why did you choose them?
Relevance: To you as a writer? To you as a writing tutor?
Writing Process: Betty Flowers article
Our Objectives:
As Writers: to move from "madman to Archtect"
As Tutors: To encourage, inspire, facilitate that process
Architect GoalS
- Draft Due NExt Week (class 1)
- -"So what"
- -Well-chosen episodes/illustrations
- -Vivid sensory detail (snapshots, thought shots)
- -voice/style
Due tUESDAY:
30 minutes of Architect work on Writing Autobiography
Inside the tutoring session:
Bedford 11-24
Getting Started:
1st priority?
Establishing Rapport:
How and why?
Q: Why is it important to sit side-by-side?
Tutor's toolbox
- asking questions (vs...?)
- Listening actively (vs...?)
- Responding as a reader (vs..?)
- Silence and wait time (vs...?)
finish the sentence:
Questioning is preferable to supplying answers, offering evaluations, or giving general advice because...
it encourages the writer to do the thinking!
The different "hats" of a tutor
- ALLY
- Coach
- commentator
- collaborator
- Expert
- learner
- counselor
Most questions aim to encourage writer to
AMPLIFY
SPECIFY
Write Away:
Craft an ideal vision for a BHS writing center
"DESCRIBE THE VIBE"
What would it look like, feel like, What would be happening there?
What Can a writing center be?
We want to Know
- Website? Their Values/mission statement?
Services?
Space?
How do they work?
Inspiration for us?
A: Sitting side-by-side "suggests that you are an ally, not an authoritarian figure."
Today: (MOnday)
-Last Writing Center Discovery presentation
-"Yes PLease"/"No thank you" list
-Core Values and Beliefs
Before We begin:
A Few Minutes to Prepare some talking points
Homework: Based on our core Values ideas generation, draft a mission statement
Today's goals:
1. reflect/debrief: how are you growing as a Writing tutor? What are a few habits or strategies you have learned "on the job"?
First Session Reflection:
Highs and Lows?
Today: The ever-elusive "so what":
What I am really Getting at here is....
Today
- Autobiography of a writer:
-Share revision work/progress with partner (20 minutes)
- "So What?"
- How does each episode develop/connect to your "so what"?
- structure, proportion
- Exploded moments"
Yesterday, we...
Discussed and explored examples/elements of powerful narrative
Due today:
30 minutes of personal narrative writing
Focus: vivid, in-the-moment
detail
today, we will...
- tutoring skill focus: helping writers elaborate and refine ideas by asking thoughtful, specific questions
try re-wording:
- a. this is too wordy
- b. this is not clear
- c. this doesn't tell me what the outcome was
- d. this language is too general
steps
- switch writing with partner
- read through, generate 4-5 questions for writer
- confer: use questions to guide
- writers: comment on the usefulness of partner's questions
HW:
1. NArrative goals: amplify, specify
2. Follow up with teacher liasons (cc me)
-thank them
-up-coming assignments?
-Classroom code?
-opportunities to work w/writers?
I thought I heard someone say "We should have a slogan"
LEt's Brainstorm...
- "Write Here. Write Now"
- "Yeah, Write."
Today:
- Pass the mission statement
- updates on goals and projects
- follow-ups with teachers?
- Synchronous Tutoring sessions
- In-person, virtual (make a live virtual appointment.)
Today's Goals:
1. Debrief/Reflect on sessions
2. operation "space clarity"
journal:
1. How have your tutoring skills evolved? What strategy, technique, or practice have you picked up "on the job"?
2. a moment when you were at your best
3. A weird or awkward moment: (hesitation? regret? lack of certainty?)