Peer Review

Today's Scripture

• Psalms 23:6 "Surely goodness and mercy shall follow me all the days of my life, and I shall dwell in the house of the Lord forever."

Revising Content

• Revisions are almost always necessary
• During content revision writers do not worry about grammar and punctuation
• Content revision must occur before hand
• Make sure to add specific questions to revise paragraphs and essay...

Exchange your draft with a partner

Instructions

• DO NOT simply write “yes” or “no”.Explain your comments.
• Submit your answers to the questions for revision credit in LoudCloud
• Review of instruction sheet

1. Does the topic sentence clearly state the topic of the paragraph and the purpose for the readers? What is the purpose?

2. Who is in the intended audience? Does the chosen audience make sense?

3. Is the analysis broken into three parts? Are other important parts missing? Are parts included that are not helpful?

4. Are elements of the analysis unclear? Write down anything that was confusing or misleading.

5. Will this analysis have a meaningful impact on readers? How?

6. Does the writer include examples? If not, make suggestions of examples that would be helpful.

7. How do the examples help readers understand and appreciate the analysis?

8. Does the writer include a strong concluding sentence to provide a satisfying ending for the readers?


9. Are there any dead words that need to be replaced with more details? What kinds of descriptions can be enhance with more description.

Submit your "Performing Analysis Peer Revision" assignment to LoudCloud using your dashboard calendar.