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Published on Nov 18, 2015

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PRESENTATION OUTLINE

DAEMON DESIGN - IMPROVEMENTS

L.O. To appeal to the reader's senses when creating a fantasy creature

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DECIDE ON YOUR DAEMON, AND DRAW A SKETCH

LABEL YOUR CREATURE USING ARTEMIS AS A GUIDE

HOUSE POINTS FOR ORIGINAL DESCRIPTIONS AND AMBITIOUS LANGUAGE

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Now that you have drawn and carefully labelled your daemon, you must write a short description of

YOUR FIRST DAY AT JORDAN COLLEGE

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The delicate petals of the flowers in the Jordan College garden looked like...

[INSERT AN EXTENDED SIMILE]

The garden made me feel/gave me the impression that...

[INSERT EMOTIONS OR YOUR CHARACTER'S THOUGHTS AND FEELINGS]
***ambitious language needed!***

Slowly, I looked down at my daemon, _____ (their name). They...

[INSERT AN EXCITING DESCRIPTION OF YOUR DAEMON, PERHAPS USING A SIMILE]
***ambitious language needed!***

Smiling, I said to my daemon, ""____.""

REMEMBER the rule, punctuation inside your speech marks.

He/she replied, ""____.""

REMEMBER the rule:

66 99 NEW SPEAKER NEW LINE!

Finally, I walked into the college, feeling...

[CONCLUDE YOUR DESCRIPTION]

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PLENARY: Swap with a partner. Which is their best word or phrase?
Write briefly WHY you like what they've written.

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