THE PERSUASIVE WRITING PROJECT

THE OPINION

• I think that we should have access to the playdeck.

REASON 1

• The 1st reason is playing outside is good exercise.
• Good exercise helps me stay healthy.
• When I come back inside,I feel calm and ready to do my work.

REASON 2

• The 2nd reason is the playdeck is very close to room 4.
• The other playdeck is far away,the Power Up Playdeck is close. We can have more time to play on the playdeck.

REASON 3

• Room 4 students had access to the playdeck over the summer.
• We behaved appropriately with each other and the equipment. I got to see my old friends like William and Charles.

REASON 4

• We learn better when we have time to go outside.
• I feel calmer when I come back. I am more focused and learn better.

REASON 5

• Finally when I go on the playground I intereact with my classmates more than I can inside.
• I play with Casey and Michael. I always play with Victor, too.

THE END