creating the a personal statement

For PROMPT #1: Describe the world you come from—for example, your family, community or school. And talk about how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.

UC Berckley is looking for the initiative, motivation, leadership, persistence, service to others, special potential and substantial experience with other cultures

Thoughtfully describe not only what you’ve done, but also the choices you have made and what you have gained as a result.

don'ts

• Don’t try to be hilariously funny or wildly creative 
• Avoid clichés.
• Don’t mistake a list of accomplishments for an essay