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Published on Nov 19, 2015
This is class feedback for the grade nine English diagnostic essay.
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1.
Class Feedback
on the ENG1D1 diagnostic essay
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2.
Good News!
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zilverbat.
3.
The majority of students...
-followed instructions
-predicted
their +s/-s
-completed the essay
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nickfyson
4.
Everyone received
a level 2, 3, or 4.
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tim caynes
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MINOR ERRORS
included...
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thisisbossi
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Mistaking homonyms like
-there, their, they're
-affect, effect
-its, it's
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Trevor Haldenby
7.
Forgetting that
"a lot"
is two words
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Leo Reynolds
8.
Joining two sentences
with a comma
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Leo Reynolds
9.
Not spelling numbers
below one hundred
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Great Beyond
10.
Using first person (I)
with no slang,
idioms or contractions
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Great Beyond
11.
Using and, but, or, etc.
(conjunctions)
to begin sentences
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mugley
12.
Avoid Stating The Following Words (in your essay):
thesis, essay, arguments
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MAJOR ERRORS
included
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14.
Combining the three arguments and the thesis into one sentence.
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abbilder
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Not using specific evidence (events, experiences, etc.) in your arguments
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Not explaining and connecting your evidence back to the thesis
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kanegen
17.
Remember...
it is a diagnostic essay
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18.
Don't Be Upset
We're here to help each other.
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Mr. Schellenberg
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