PRESENTATION OUTLINE
The Exposition of my story is that Emily is in the Academy and she has to go in the Trials to become a member in the Guardian Council.
the MAIN CHARACTERS (good)
- LEON IS A FOX THAT IS HELPING EMILY
- RONIN WAS THE BEST PUPIL OF VIGO & IS A GIRL
- PIERCE WAS THE BROTHER OF RONIN BUT NOT SMART
- VIGO IS A STONE-KEEPER, LIKE EMILY BUT IS VERY OLD
- EMILY IS THE HEROINE OF THE BOOK & A GIRL
the MAIN CHARACTERS (good)
- MISKIT IS PINK-LIKE MACHINE MADE BY SILAS
- TELLIS IS THE SON OF THE ELF KING HIMSELF
- LUGER IS A ELF WITH THE POWER OF TEN MEN
- DRAGO IS DRAGON THAT FOLLOWS COGSLEY
- COGSLEY IS A ROBOT THAT CONTROLS THE HOUSE
the main CHARACTERS (bad)
- (REAL) DUNCAN COLE WAS A BRAVE SOLDIER
- (FAKE) DUNCAN COLE IS MADE OF STONE
- MAX IS A BOY THAT MADE THE FAKE COLE
- LEN IS SOLDIER THAT FOLLOWS MAX'S LEAD
THE SETTING IS AT CIELIS, THE CAVE, THE CATACOMBS OF CIELIS, AND YARBOO PRISON.
CIELIS IS A PLACE IN THE SKIES THAT IS WHERE THE GUARDIAN COUNCIL LIVES AFTER THE HUGE ATTACK FROM THE ELF KING. CIELIS HAS LOTS OF PLACES INSIDE OF IT. THEY ARE; THE ZEPPELIN KEEP, THE GARDEN OF THE KEEPERS, THE GUARDIAN CASTLE, THE SHIPBUILDER'S MARKET, THE AIRSHIP DOCKS, THE NIMBUS SQUARE, THE CIELAN SPAN, THE COUNCIL CHAMBER, AND THE WATERFALL CORRIDOR.
THE CAVE IS HUGE WITH A EMPTY HOLE ON THE TOP. INSIDE OF THE CAVE, THERE IS A HOUSE WITH A GIANT TREE OVER IT. INSIDE THE HOUSE, THERE IS A ROBOT NAMED CECIL AND A OLD MAN NAMED VIGO. THE CAVE IS THE HOME OF VIGO.
THE CATACOMBS OF CIELIS IS A CATACOMB THAT HAS LOTS OF CHAMBERS INSIDE OF IT. INSIDE OF IT ARE; THE MOTHER STONE CHAMBER, THE STONE-CUTTER ALCOVE, THE GUARDIAN TOMB, THE HEXAGON FIELD, THE COLOSSAL HALLS, THE TRANSPORE, THE ROBOT MINES, AND THE COLOSSUS WORKSHOP.
YARBOO PRISON IS A PRISON TO KEEP THE BAD PEOPLE INSIDE. IT IS WHERE THE GUARDIAN COUNCIL KEEPS THE CRIMINALS INSIDE BUT NOW, THE "CRIMINALS" ARE JUST RANDOM EVERYDAY PEOPLE, DOING THEIR JOB.
The First Conflict is when Max, Emily, Ronin, and Pierce are in the Trials but they got teleported into another place named, "The Catacombs of Cielis" instead of a place the Guardian Council created called the "VOID".
(THE 1 PART OF THE TRIALS)
The Second Conflict is when Max, Emily, Ronin, and Pierce are in the Second part of the Trials, the "CIELAN CHILDREN GAME", in it, Max and Pierce; Emily and Ronin are suppose to follow numbers in the ground and if you step on the wrong tile, you will sink into the ground.
(THE 2 PART OF THE TRIALS)
