How to make a good presentation

55 Cancrie

• Is twice the size of earth and a 3rd of it is made of solid dimond the planet is 40 ligt years away and we cannot visit it

Wha't is wrong with this slide?

• Use more explanation: Why can't we visit it?
• Ron on sentences, no punctuation, periods, spelling
• Add supporting detaills

Wha't is wrong with this slide?

• Use more explanation: Why can't we visit it?
• Run on sentences, no punctuation, periods, spelling
• Add supporting detaills

glise 581c

• It orbits a red darf star
• one side of it is very hot and the other is freezing

What should i fix?

• ADD MORE INFO!
• What are solar flares?. Be specific.
• What is a dwarf star?
• Why cant we live there?
• Why can 't we live there?
• Make sure you are using proper punctuation

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