If you feel like your concluding statements are not saying anything new or interesting, focus on a particular concluding statement and ask yourself: "so what?"
Restates the thesis and is usually painfully short.
Does not push ideas forward
Ex: "These ethnographic narratives have demonstrated that education can be a major force of social change, particularly in generating social action and activism."
This kind of conclusion usually draws on emotion to make its appeal, but while this emotion and even sentimentality may be very heartfelt, it is usually out of character with the rest of an analytical paper
Example: "Education is our saving grace against ignorance."
This kind of conclusion includes extra information that the writer found or thought of but couldn’t integrate into the main paper.
You may find it hard to leave out details that you discovered after hours of research and thought, but adding random information at the end of your paper only creates confusion