At first impressions from just looking at the front page, its very striking. The front page is very colourful however sticks with a colour theme throughout which is easy to the eye. The logo also repeats its self throughout each page which helps with marketing the band. However on a few pages such as the tour dates, i do think it can become a little hard to read with that background still there. As you almost still look at the logo in the background as its brighter than the text. Which means the audience would get distracted from the tour dates and therefore they may lose money. I did really like the bloopers added because it allows the audience to identify with the actors, but it also adds a bit of fun. Overall I don't think it is as professional looking as the other one I looked at but I still think it is really well done.