G3-B(IT)

• Don't the word it unless noun is clear
• Don't use it unless noun is clear
• Playing with a book is only fun when it is flimsy

C5

• There are quotation marks in a story title
• No: TheLandlady
• Yes: "The LandLady"

S4-b

• Don't switch tenses for no reason
• No: was curled up.(tense is present)
• Yes:is curled up(tense is still present)

C3-D

• Plural verbs
• No: She give
• Yes: she gives

5S-B

• HE ISNT WRITTEN AND MURDERED BY RONALD DAH
• No: who later is murdered and written by Roald Dahl.
• Yes: who is later killed, written by Roald Dahl.

C5

• Write correct format
• No 8
• Yes E-8

P10

• Underline the title
• No Mockkingjay
• Yes _Mockingjay_

P1-a

• Use a comma before conjunction joining independent clauses
• No: Every time that Katniss has an obstacle she overcomes it with her friends but sometimes.
• Yes: Every time Katniss has an obstacle she over comes it with her friends, but sometimes

P1-b

• Use a comma after introductory phrase or clause
• No When, Peeta is hijacked by the captitol Katniss is still her friend but he thinks she is not.
• Yes When Peeta is hijacked by the capitol, Katniss is his friend, but he thinks she is not.

G5

• Avoid sentence fragments
• No When Della is talking to Peeta about trusting Katniss. "She killed my friends"
• Yes When Della is talking to Peeta about trusting Katniss, Peeta states, "she killed my friends."

P5-e

• Periods and comma go within quotation marks except of citation follows
• No '"She killed my friends. My family. Don't even go near her! She's a mutt!'"
• Yes. '"She killed my friends. My family. Don't even go near her! She's a mutt'"

S5

• Rewrite sentences that don't make sense
• No Peeta thinks that Katniss is his enemy but he is hijacked and is tricked into thinking that Katniss is his enemy.
• Yes Peeta thinks that Katniss is not his friend but is highjacked into thinking this

G3-b

• Make pronoun references clear
• No the other districts into joining them
• Yes the other districts into joining the rebels in resisting.

P1-A

• Use commas correctly
• No people other than Esperanza, hope, and
• Yes people, other than Esperanza

P1-B

• Use periods
• No things are a certain way
• Yes things are a certain way.

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P8

• Use capitalization
• No: esperanza
• Yes: Esperanza

P8

• Use commas correctly
• No there I say pointing up to the third floor
• Yes there, I say pointing up to the third floor

W5-c

• Don't use slang
• No bares
• Yes takes

P5-e

• Use quotations correctly
• No tortilla star".
• Yes tortilla star."

G1

• Know how to English
• No: another expect of mine
• Yes: another expectation of mine

S4-A

• Don't use the word your
• No where you had blocks and built things
• Yes where a player has blocks and builds things

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