PRESENTATION OUTLINE
Scenes Must Have
Snapshots descriptions of the characters and/or the setting
Thoughtshots of the character
can be thoughts of the past
can be thoughts about what is going on
can be thoughts about the future
Dialogue talking to others, to objects to themselves, could also be writing
Snapshots-looking at description
I started walking toward the players just as they started toward me--and began to pick up speed. I could feel the ground shake as they reached a full-on stampede.
It was then that I made a startling discovery. They were all dressed in football uniforms like I was, but their jerseys were blue and red, not yellow like mine.
Snapshot-looking at description
...my own private down under, in the little room Grim built for me there. Glued up this cheap paneling, right? It sort of buckles away from the concrete cellar walls, a regular ripple effect, but do I complain about the crummy paneling, or the rug that smells like mold?
Thoughtshots-what are you thinking?
The worst part was that I liked Cap now. Sure, I’d been awful to him. But that had been back in the days when we’d made him president as a joke and sent him wandering after fake press conferences and stolen his shoes while he was meditating. Back when Zach had been calling the shots. What a bunch of jerks we’d been...
Dialogue-what are you talking about?
I hugged her. “Rain, I missed you so much.”
She hugged me back, then pulled away and held me at arm’s length. “I see that. Have you been in a fight?”
“I tried to stop one,” I admitted. “I guess I’ve got a lot to learn about peacemaking.”
She nodded proudly. “Good for you. We...
